i think your Content about the topic are quite clearly, i can understand what you try to said about( i think this is an PSA), you guy are using lot of words and clearly pronunciation but the effect are kind of strange cause it to loud and the volume are noy so equally. You guys are done well while catching the topics althrough the PSA. You guy are not using lot of key words but it still find. about the rehearsal, i think that is quite smooth but it not so well cause you guy not using your emotion enough to put in the sentences. the rythm is good but is not so well at the begining of the music part. you guys have no pronunciation mistake, well done. about music, transition and lenght, ithink the lenght is ok and music are kind of good, the Puncjing and Cracking effect are good too but the problem is the transition cause i think it's too fast and kind of supries. so far, you guys done the really good jobs
I think it is pretty good PSA. Truthful information and clear ideas are presented.The delivery keep sounds well rehearsed, and kept the rhythm the audience to listen not make them boring. The effect,music make it better. It keep focus the topic. Vocabulary is improve. The length is just enough. Conclusion clearly summarizes key information. The volume is pretty well, some is big and some is small and the transition is pretty good. But the beginning is shock and make me surprise so they need to fix it. About the part "Why should I" i can't heard it well and i have to listen it for 3 or 4 time so i could hear it. The first time I thought it was "so i so" I like the last part, the music make it better.
i think your Content about the topic are quite clearly, i can understand what you try to said about( i think this is an PSA), you guy are using lot of words and clearly pronunciation but the effect are kind of strange cause it to loud and the volume are noy so equally. You guys are done well while catching the topics althrough the PSA. You guy are not using lot of key words but it still find.
Trả lờiXóaabout the rehearsal, i think that is quite smooth but it not so well cause you guy not using your emotion enough to put in the sentences. the rythm is good but is not so well at the begining of the music part. you guys have no pronunciation mistake, well done.
about music, transition and lenght, ithink the lenght is ok and music are kind of good, the Puncjing and Cracking effect are good too but the problem is the transition cause i think it's too fast and kind of supries.
so far, you guys done the really good jobs
I think it is pretty good PSA. Truthful information and clear ideas are presented.The delivery keep sounds well rehearsed, and kept the rhythm the audience to listen not make them boring. The effect,music make it better. It keep focus the topic. Vocabulary is improve. The length is just enough. Conclusion clearly summarizes key information. The volume is pretty well, some is big and some is small and the transition is pretty good. But the beginning is shock and make me surprise so they need to fix it. About the part "Why should I" i can't heard it well and i have to listen it for 3 or 4 time so i could hear it. The first time I thought it was "so i so" I like the last part, the music make it better.
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